Saint Petersburg

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6 Responses

  1. jef says:

    ini kaya cerpen yak…

    yosu: he eh cerpen.

  2. vendy says:

    abis baca karyanya Djenar yeh?

    yosu: who’s Djenar?

  3. ching says:

    ceritanya kereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnn….

    yosu: ahaha. thanks.

  4. Djenar = Djenar Maesa Ayu 🙂

    pembukaan kisah yg bikin merinding!!showing the character’s personality (a bit lonely with a twist of anger, obsession and maybe distrust… hehe.. baca: gue sotoy lol)

    Bagus sih, keliatannya u menguasai geografi dengan mantap (mengingat geo gue yg pernah dapet NOL hehehe), sayang gue ga tralu tau ttg geo dr kota2/tempat2 yg u sebut.. mungkin next time agk diterangin dikit ttg tmp2 tersebut atau pilih lokasi yg org tau..like, paris? haha. idk. fool me-__-.
    endingnya agak terlalu “dilempar”, tapi cukup ok untuk mengikat keselurhan cerita.

    in other words?

    Hey, i LIKE it! XD

    *keep writing, im thrill to read!!* 🙂

    yosu: Ahaha, thanks! It means a lot coming from you! You wait there, I’ll get to you sooner or later. XD I have one with Paris and it’s Louvre in the draft. Tapi nggak tau apakah mau dilepas ato nggak. *sindrom nggak yakin diri sendiri*

  5. harus yakiiiiinn!!! 🙁

    yosu: yak udah yakin! Tuh wes tak lepas.

  6. Sun-T says:

    abis bikin puisi, jadi bikin cerpen…. yosu emank hebat…..
    *plok…plok…plok*

    sejak kapan yosu kena sindrom “ngga yakin diri sendiri”?…
    gw tunggu lanjutannya y:D

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